Give them a reason,
to open a slit,
Tweaking the treason,
faking the skit.
They welcome the seasons,
of sappy green will,
Indulging and gorging,
on willing young skill.
Thrashing in rivers,
of hospital blue,
I love you, I hate you,
I’d die for you too,
I want it, I need it,
I'm drained from the fight,
I had it, you took it,
Hell bred all my spite.
Loaded commitments,
unpayable loans,
All my impediments,
These broken pencil bones.
-BSW 6/18/2011

If there were words to put to this you have done it. The final stanza puts the final pull to the heart. 'pencil bones' such an interesting thought...great poetry friend ~ Rose
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